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Ms. Roderick’s Ceramics Students |
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Sabino High School |
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Fall 2003 |
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Confused |
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Glad, gloomy
girl-gone-wild |
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Colored jewels strewn across her face |
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Twisted lips
like luscious lies |
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Mismatched eyes like dazzling diamonds |
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Acting out
her deepest desires |
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Class Poem |
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Mixed Moods |
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Sun carries warmth |
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Euphoria expressed
as ruby red rays |
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Rain squelches hope |
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Depression depicted with gloomy,
pale tears |
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Class Poem |
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Ambipolar |
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Pale, pure moon-face |
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Craters of old,
cold tears |
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Bright burnt-brown
sun-face |
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Luminous jeweled rays |
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Class Poem |
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Cosmic Cornucopia |
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Scorching,
burnt-brown rays |
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Ruby jewels,
blinding star |
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Freezing,
ominous craters |
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Bleak satellite afar |
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Like fire and ice |
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Class Poem |
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Desperation |
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I’m the child
of great expectations |
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gentle, generous, gracious |
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In search of acceptance |
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for who I am |
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derelict, depleted, disturbed |
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Alone in the crowd |
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Aahhhhh! |
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I surrender. |
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Class Poem |
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Students in Ms. Roderick's ceramics classes at Sabino High School
created personal masks and composed personal mask poems. The personal masks
were part of a mask unit that also included research on a cultural mask and
recreating that mask in clay. |
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To prepare to write their personal mask poems, students worked with
teacher-librarian Dr. Moreillon to learn how their masks could be used as
poetry writing prompts. As they viewed photographs of traditional masks,
students listened to poetry related to those masks. They made connections
between each photo and poem. |
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Students learned to web themes, ideas, and words related to a
personal mask. They learned or reviewed poetic devices: rhythm, rhyme,
alliteration, assonance, personification, onomatopoeia, personification, simile,
and metaphor. We discussed voice (or mood) and correspondence between mask
and poem. Using one mask as a prompt for all five classes, each period
wrote a group poem and evaluated it using a rubric. |
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After completing their personal masks, students utilized that rubric
as a guide as they composed their poems. Students self-assessed their
poems; Dr. Moreillon assessed them as well. Ms. Roderick evaluated students'
personal masks. Students' masks and poems were on display in the library
from December 1st through 3rd, 2003 in the Mask and Poetry Museum. |
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©2003
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