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Mask and Poetry Museum
Ms. Roderick’s Ceramics Students
Sabino High School
Fall 2003
       First Period
Confused
Glad, gloomy
girl-gone-wild
Colored jewels strewn across her face
Twisted lips
like luscious lies
Mismatched eyes like dazzling diamonds
Acting out
her deepest desires
Class Poem
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   Second Period
Mixed Moods
Sun carries warmth
Euphoria expressed
as ruby red rays
Rain squelches hope
Depression depicted with gloomy,
pale tears
Class Poem
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    Fifth Period
Ambipolar
Pale, pure moon-face
Craters of old,
cold tears
Bright burnt-brown
sun-face
Luminous jeweled rays
Class Poem
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    Sixth Period
Cosmic Cornucopia
Scorching,
burnt-brown rays
Ruby jewels,
blinding star
Freezing,
ominous craters
Bleak satellite afar
Like fire and ice
Class Poem
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 Seventh Period
Desperation
I’m the child
of great expectations
gentle, generous, gracious
In search of acceptance
for who I am
derelict, depleted, disturbed
Alone in the crowd
Aahhhhh!
I surrender.
Class Poem
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"Students in Ms."
          Students in Ms. Roderick's ceramics classes at Sabino High School created personal masks and composed personal mask poems. The personal masks were part of a mask unit that also included research on a cultural mask and recreating that mask in clay.
          To prepare to write their personal mask poems, students worked with teacher-librarian Dr. Moreillon to learn how their masks could be used as poetry writing prompts. As they viewed photographs of traditional masks, students listened to poetry related to those masks. They made connections between each photo and poem.
     Students learned to web themes, ideas, and words related to a personal mask. They learned or reviewed poetic devices: rhythm, rhyme, alliteration, assonance, personification, onomatopoeia, personification, simile, and metaphor. We discussed voice (or mood) and correspondence between mask and poem. Using one mask as a prompt for all five classes, each period wrote a group poem and evaluated it using a rubric.
    After completing their personal masks, students utilized that rubric as a guide as they composed their poems. Students self-assessed their poems; Dr. Moreillon assessed them as well. Ms. Roderick evaluated students' personal masks. Students' masks and poems were on display in the library from December 1st through 3rd, 2003 in the Mask and Poetry Museum.
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